Friday, 13 June 2014
The storm
The storm of June 2014
On Wednesday the 11th at home with my family watching the shocking News’’ about the storm but I,m then ready to sleep but wait I can hear chattering trees dripping rain. Midnight all windy and cold can’t see a thing strong wind black clouds .Next cold Morning little twigs and sticks all over the street and drive through even frost on the grass watery windows look over at the neighboured looks ok streets all clear white clouds sun shining bright not a big storm as the good thing was that our roof didn’t come off.As I drive up the corner I can see bent trees and wet footpaths as I come to school it is a little rain on the court I can see kids talking about last night's storm and I also hear really bad news from others say that they had a bad storm .But the shocking thing that I was so surprised that I slept through the strongest storm in New Zealand but it was ok. The Storm of 2014 I think that we should give the storm a name like cyclone Lusi I am very sad that the zoo got smashed but that’s
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14.10.14 I really like how you told your experience. You explained really well. Maybe you could finish it but that's ..... I like how you used the words shocked, frost, chattering.
ReplyDelete13.11.14 I really like how you said how you felt like Tina said and I think that you should finish it.
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